along the river

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Doug, this nearly made me cry. I think it's amazing -- this is the very issue that you've been dealing with for some time, and now you're answer has come in this way. I hear a unique voice in this poem. Thanks so much for sharing, and I'm really glad you're blogging again. Your one of those few I really look forward to.
EF: thanks so much for this feedback. It stuns me--it makes me feel good that you've tied this poem with my struggle...my journey...and I'm still trying to get a full understanding of what the "answer" is...

it's good to be blogging again--I appreciate your encouragement.


I find that I often write things -- poems and even letters -- that usually no one else sees but my wife when I'm sorting through something. It's amazing what you can look back on and realize after time. There's a theme, for example, in many of my poems about the difference between "looking" and "seeing". I never intended that theme, but it's there nevertheless.

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